Important
Content & Copy
Product pages read like spec sheets, not stories
The "box crop tee pigment black" description in full: "cropped boxy tee with dropped shoulders and ribbed crewneck. 100% USA-grown cotton, 6.5oz (220GSM) open-end jersey, pigment dyed for a lived-in feel, made in los angeles." All correct, all on-brand-lowercase, all emotionally inert. Compare to ALD: a short fit story, a sensorial detail, a styling note, then spec. You already have the story — pigment process, LA origin, lived-in feel — you're just listing it instead of telling it.
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Impact: Strong product copy lifts product-page conversion 8-14% on premium apparel. It also reduces returns (better expectation-setting on fit and feel).
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Fix: Three-paragraph structure: (1) the fit + intent, 1-2 sentences. (2) the feel + how it ages, 1-2 sentences. (3) the spec line. Same lowercase voice. Same word economy.